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TranslationChain - Homesick by ~S1mbelmyne:iconS1mbelmyne:



Homesick

Don't let them see you blink,
My mother said, that's why I bother to
step out when my eyes dry. My skill
with paint-brushes is clumsy. Colours blot
and spill, shining like sea foam on rocks;
the Professor wipes its glow
from my naked arms. Children whisper

behind starfish's arms. They go to play
on the sunny warm garden, but I stay in
as my mother told me. Underneath the window
there's an aquarium full of golden fish, that swirl,
swirl, following their own reflections.

I dip my finger to bring one up,
to see it glow and stir, cold in my hands.
And I dive my face deeper on the water.
My eyelids slide over my dry eyes.
I breathe, and breathe and breathe.

Translated from the original poem 'Homesick', by Salli Shepherd (:devsalshep:)
©2007-2009 ~S1mbelmyne
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Author's Comments

Translated from the original poem 'Homesick', by Salli Shepherd (*salshep).

This is the third translation on the Poetry *TranslationChain first experiment. You can read all about it here.


Chain 1 -- November 1 - 25

1 *FelixT English to German done :D
2 ~GuBCM German to Portuguese done :hmm:
3 *S1mbelmyne Portuguese to English done :pie: (just because it sounds like Pi)
4 ~Bersaglio English to Italian
5 ~iThemba Italian to German
6 *endless-one German to Spanish
7 ~opiumsmoker Spanish to Latin
8 *NLY Latin to English
9 ~ordie English to Portuguese
10 *batousaijin Portuguese to French
11 ~DuilleogUaigneach French to English
12 ~Maly-Jo English to Spanish
13 ~AngelofGod87 Spanish to English
14 =Ronjana English to Dutch
15 ~Hongske Dutch to French
16 ~RagingGryphon French to English
17 ~AyumiFey English to Polish
18 ~hopelesswriter Polish to English
19 ~malicedomestic English to German
20 =chakrabird German to Danish
21 =Fladmose Danish to English
22 ~tigress-phan English to Dutch
23 ~Ailoura-aithe Dutch to English
24 ~ancient-seeker English to French
25 =lady-shirakawa French to English


and now, go worship dictionary.com :)

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:iconsalshep:
:dance: Woo hoo!

Thankyou SO much for participating, dear. :heart:

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:iconmaly-jo:
Yayyyyyy! I really love how your translation came up! Specially last stanza! Awesome job! :heart:
:iconbersaglio:
Great, I'll start working; with luck, shouldn't take less than 12 hours between our two translations. I like how the last stanza turned out.

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:icons1mbelmyne:
you're welcome. the chain is such a great idea. (:


I just hope I didn't kill your poem.

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Haha no! It's going very well, as with less change than I expected thus far. It's so fascinating to read it in other languages and try to find the English equivalents for the words.

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thank you! :)

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:iconangelofgod87:
Ok so this is the peice of poetry that I have to translate?? J/w cause I am a bit lost as to how all this works... enlighten me.

TTFN
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Enlightened! =P

Lol. Have fun :D
:iconangelofgod87:
haha thanks

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Me
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"I learned a long time ago that one note can go a long way if it's the right one, and it will probably whip the guy with 20 notes." ~ Les Paul
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